In the Pond by Ha Jin
Zoland Books, 178 pages, $20.
In the past decade, Ha Jin has emerged as one of the preeminent
English-language chroniclers of day-to-day life in the People's Republic of
China. His short stories, which can be found in the collections Ocean of
Words (Vintage) and Under the Red Flag (University of Georgia
Press), respectfully portray ordinary men and women trying to hold on to their
honor and dignity as they are pulled back and forth by the currents of modern
China's cultural and political changes.
Jin knows of what he writes. A native of China, he served for six years in the
People's Liberation Army before immigrating to the United States in the
mid-'80s. In his compelling first novel, In the Pond, Jin again gives
voice to the disenfranchised, this time through the story of roguish underdog
Shao Bin.
A low-level worker at the Harvest Fertilizer Plant in provincial China in the
late '70s, Bin lives in a 12-by-20-foot room with his wife and his two-year-old
daughter. When Harvest's housing committee passes him over for a new apartment
and assigns it to a less senior employee who is having an affair with a party
leader, Bin is incensed.
And so begins a tireless fight for justice. Although he is at the bottom of
the factory hierarchy and is not a physically imposing fellow, Bin nonetheless
possesses a secret weapon that makes him a man to be reckoned with: he is a
talented writer and painter. "The true scholar's brush must encourage good and
warn against evil," he reads in a book called The Essence of Ancient Chinese
Thought; inspired, he draws a scathing satirical cartoon lampooning the
party leaders, Party Director Ma and Secretary Liu, who have denied him
housing. As soon as his cartoon is published in a local newspaper, Bin finds
himself in an all-out war with Ma and Liu, who dock his pay and verbally and
physically abuse him. Using his pen as a sword, Bin responds by barging in to
party meetings with elegantly drawn signs that denounce the officials. He also
publishes a barrage of cartoons and critical articles in regional, then
national, publications.
Jin employs both broad slapstick comedy and refined humor to make his
narrative flow as freely as Harvest's fertilizer. In an inspired scene
reminiscent of a silent-movie brawl, Ma and Liu attack Bin at a party meeting
he is trying to disrupt. Pinned to the ground by Ma, smothered under Liu's
bottom, "Bin realized he would faint in a few seconds if he didn't take action.
So he . . . took a big bite." Jin milks this bottom-biting
gag for all it's worth: Liu has a photo taken of his bruised rump, presents it
as evidence of Bin's instability at a factory meeting, and sends copies to his
superiors in the party. Unfortunately for Liu, the results are more damaging to
his reputation than to Bin's.
In many European tales -- those of Koestler and Solzhenitsyn spring to mind --
individuals are crushed by the fates meted out to them by heavy-handed
Communist bureaucracies. Jin's Chinese protagonist, however, seems to thrive on
conflict. As Ma and Liu try to thwart Bin's quest for justice and his attempts
to leave the factory, Bin begins to discover and realize his artistic
potential. He receives job offers and an invitation to attend university,
things that he had never before dreamed possible. The reader laughs with Bin as
he transforms untenable situations into remarkable opportunities; because of
the interference of his superiors, however, he is unable to take advantage of
them.
Underneath its humor, In the Pond exposes the plight of a country where
food, housing, and job prospects are scarce while corrupt officials are
abundant. It's a clear-eyed commentary on the deprivations and limitations of
life under Communism.
-- Nicholas Patterson